In the second process(?!)

😦 In the second process, the sperm enters the egg, and the zygote is formed.

It’s difficult to imagine more than one process here. I think you mean:

🙂 In the second stage of the process, the sperm enters the egg, and the zygote is formed.

In English a process can occasionally be broken down into sub-processes, but normally we talk about these as stages. Indonesians often make the same mistake with menu and items on a menu:

😦 The second menu is sirloin steak.

🙂 The second item on the menu is sirloin steak.

@eapguru

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